Edge of a Song (quatern)
Edge of A Song (Quatern)Sliding on the edge of a songFloating to a place much too darkNo dreams or memories could liveI stay in the corner hidingSitting, eyes squeezed shut, ears openSliding on the...
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Thanks Zaida... besides it being a quatern ..it wasn't that hard to write. Thaks Deb
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Deb...The air fresher than the memoriesBrings me safely back to myselfSliding on the edge of a songI like the idea of sliding in and out of a memory through song. Such a beautiful poem you've created...
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Deb ~Beautifully penned and wonderfully constructed!The mood is palpable...Even the rhythm suits the tone.This is a terrific write, beginning to end - including the title!Excellent! ~ Maire
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FairEllen..thanks for your nice comments. Funny how a song can bring us to another place and recall mamories. Thanks Deb
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Maire ...thank you for the award. I am honored to be among such wonderful poets. Lucky day I stumbled in here. Glad you like the poem. Deb
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Deb:OK, I'm on edge--- what's a Quatern --- other than 4 lines per verse, 8 syllables per line, and 1st & last line are the same?Is it the same as a Quatrain?
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Gro ...4 verses...8 syls to a line...4 lines and the first line of first verse is the 2nd line to the 2nd verse and the 3rd line to the 3rd verse.....and the fourth line to the 4th verse....
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Deb, you have chosen a perfect phrase for this form. I get a neat visiaul from the phrase, sliding in on the edge of a song! I think I am always sliding on the edge of some song! This form is done to...
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Jared thanks you so much for beacon and award. I am so glad you enjoyed this and that you could feel something.. Edge of a song says a lot to me...I have heard a song and it has taken me to another...
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Deb, you have quite elegantly "hit the nail on the head" with this write. Different songs instantly take me to different times and places. This is a refreshing new approach . Dee
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Dee thanks so much for your generous words. What would the world be...without music...???Deb
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Deb, I was not responsible for either the award or the beacon, it's just that when I got here they had already been bestowed! LOLJared
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Deb,Coming back to this one is just like living in the heart of the song.Sarah
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Glad had a chance to read this Deb. Greatly enjoyed. Regards, Maryse
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it sounds gentle but sometimes things can get bumpy too - ask Bette Davis!
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Hi Deb tempo tamed Light begins to seep through the dark The air fresher than the memories Brings me safely back to myself Sliding on the edge of a song Beautiful poem and form. Music has a way of...
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